You move the clouds along
through the freedom of your sky
all on winds of song
create soft pictures which then please
a daydreamers wandering eye.
Sometimes your tunes echo
all around these lonely hills
and I am wistful
longing
for…
Earth feels your kiss of passion
as you sing a lovers song
and, sometimes when you stroke
her with such tenderness
she too, sings along.
Drift on precious wind
tuneful whistler of the sky
yet
Who has seen the wind?
Neither you, nor I.
~*~
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Shared with Carry on Tuesday#176 Who has seen the wind? Neither I or you.
dVerse Poets OpenLinkNights #65
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Beautiful poem…
crossbow
Wonderful look at one of nature’s marvelous wonders.
Beautiful, and softly written
such a lovely song you sing for and with the wind…intimate and tender
Wonderful!
The wind… an allusion, perhaps, to those unseen things that rule the world.
Lovely. She can be a wonderful companion and passionate lover, that wind. But when she loses her temper…
Bren, I like the ever so slight bit of rhyming here, it works very well. Lovely write.
Pamela
Even through the longing, there is a comforting feel to this. I can almost feel the breeze 🙂
Lovely share specially these lines:
Drift on precious wind
tuneful whistler of the sky
Hope you enjoyed the long weekend ~
beautiful! i especially love:
“Earth feels your kiss of passion
as you sing a lovers song
and, sometimes when you stroke
her with such tenderness
she too, sings along.”
♥
There was a nice rhythm to this, a tenderness as well. I dig the pic D. 🙂 Thanks for passing through!
I love, love, love this one!!
the freedom of your sky… just lovely. it was all like a feather, floating on the breeze.
… we know not were it comes or goes… interesting write
Beautifully written.
…sigh…just beautiful. One to let float on in my mind. Nicely done Bren.
Some rhyme in there too out what fun came do. Such an intimate moment caught. I have seen the wind, really, I have, okay, not.
Beautiful…
Inspired and beautiful, gave me the chills.
Bren, a beautiful poem!
So lovely and soothing … just what I need today, Bren … thank you.
I love how you made the Earth and the wind lovers – inspired! A wonderful writing.
Really beautiful … loved the way you moved with the wind !!!
Nice. I got such a good feeling reading this. It’s like a wedding song, but for the union between wind and earth. Lovely.
This is incredibly beautiful. One of my favorites of yours….So wistful. I love “tuneful whistler of the sky”….way cool!
ah i love the intimacy in this…with the world and the wind…as it moves us along…love listening to its song as well…lovely piece…
Beautiful personification of wind, Bren. Wind can be very gentle and loving sometimes for sure….especially the warm summer breezes.