Utopia

Through passages of time
fragmented memories remain
noble in truth
for,
what we do here
echoes into eternity.

I’ll climb and keep on climbing
until all the mountains
are conquered
and, standing tall will hear
whispers of night breezes
still softly teaching wisdom.

The view from there will be clear
as clouds part, open unto the universe
and Heaven’s breath reaches down to
fill the swell of my soul
blessing it with the key
to paradise
but,
not yet, I pray

not yet.

~*~

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*This is my Utopia.
You may say I’m a dreamer, but I’m not the only one. (John Lennon)

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Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada and design custom made candles

34 thoughts on “Utopia”

  1. I absolutely love this. To me, it has such a spiritual meaning. I think it’s my Utopia too, but as you say, not just yet.

  2. I love this mythic image and the contentment in your voice. This is such a comforting message for someone who is missing a loved one.

  3. Gorgeous writing, so full of ambition, anticipation and of longing for a life not completed – not yet.

  4. fill the swell of my soul
    blessing it with the key
    to paradise

    Yes, there’s a lot to live for. So much to do in so little time! Nicely written, Bren!

    Hank

  5. A beautiful climb up the mountain–you have such vision! and thank you for leaving us with the assurance–not yet–would miss you mucho

  6. i am just tired of climbing mountains…i’d rather curl up under a tree…and nap for some time….where’s the assurance that the view will be clearer there , than it is here…..

    you capture your emotions neatly….

  7. Bren, you are a star … beautiful words … echoes into eternity … wow! There’s something wonderful about ‘whispers of night breezes / still softly teaching wisdom’ and the words ‘not yet’ are simply haunting ~ beautiful

  8. ” I’ll climb and keep on climbing
    until all the mountains
    are conquered
    and, standing tall will hear
    whispers of night breezes
    still softly teaching wisdom.”
    well, written, totally encouraging and strengths writing. Blessings

  9. what we do here
    echoes into eternity….ha, nice truth embedded in there….

    the breath of heaven stretching down to swell your soul…smiles…love that bit bren….quite the experience…

  10. Very nice, Bren. I am sure the view WILL be beautiful…but…..sometime in the (distant) future is fine with me too…

  11. Until all the mountains are conquered… Yes, these words are something I really needed right now 🙂
    One special poem I would say…I just wonder why this ending…in spite the yearning…

  12. what we do here
    echoes into eternity…so true…i like the images…the climbing…the standing on the hill, heaven’s breath reaching down…and will hand us the key at just the right time..

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