Sometimes we lose the way home
lost inside life’s endless storms
we flounder
sink into the mire
feel so small against
the weight of it all.
When I do
I turn to you
sky and sea
breathing, in your
unconditional clarity
You fill me with such
dreams again
where new doors await
their opening.
~*~
© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved
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A beautiful winged guardian in your world! So lovely!
I love doors and what might lie in wait behind them. Beautifully written, Bren.
Home is the sanctuary, and so I love the doors in the picture. And I love that in finding the way home after visiting “sky and sea / breathing, in your / unconditional clarity” your doors, space, sense of home, and dreams are new, re-newed.
Fill me up baby! That was a wonderfully romantic write and I love when people are in this mindset, it makes everything possible. Great work.
I think we can all relate to this…nicely done 🙂
Where new doors await!
I love the whole idea behind this poem, and you expressed it so well.
Unconditional clarity? That sounds good to me…
Nice … and so true … your words bring peace to my heart, Bren
We all just need to find what nourishes us. Everyone is different…
When lost in time, a little reflection will do wonders. It sets one thinking when the mind wanders and ideas come flashing back! Great write, Bren!
Hank
Yes, you are right, I think, Bren….if you look intensely at the sky or the sea and let your mind dream, you CAN find your way!!
I like that unconditional clarity ~ Lovely writing Bren ~
DD2…
FF55 returns on Friday 13th
Hope to see you…G
Is there a doggie door for the cat too? haha if not clear skies await and that isn’t a bad fate.
new doors await their opening….
Soooooooo lovely!!!!!! Especially the hope of the last two lines…..
breathing in your unconditional clarity….i seek wide skies as well in those moments…allowing me to breathe easy…and new doors is a cool thing too…
This is really lovely and peaceful.