Fire in the sky


With gay aBANDon
she TOSSed back her head
and the WAter shimmERed.

DanCING flecks of gold
shone like a treaSURE chest
highLItING her loveLY face
from the fIRE in the sky.

~*~

© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved

Hope I did this right  (gulps)  LOL

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Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada and design custom made candles

12 thoughts on “Fire in the sky”

  1. It’s a short piece. I like your spring. The image is striking and it’s clearly elucidated through the refraction of sound and rhythm. Very accomplished.

  2. nice…tight little piece, but its still got beats and great visuals…love the gold of the sun on the water and skin…and you even got a little crazy with the caps along with us…smiles….

  3. I think you did well. I like highlighting a face from the warmth in the sky. 🙂

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