Poem Sketching

Google Image by Holly Vampasaurous


a shadow of wings
blurred at the edges
and gone in a flash
yet the shortness of flight
cannot convey its depth.

Maybe a spirit
trying to find its way
(as are we all)

Water music plays
its liquid serenade
expanding the circles
in my mind
drawing me in, whilst
a distant drummer, beats
beckoning me to horizons
I have yet to dream and
shores I’ve yet to see.


© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved

Shared with With Real Toads Poem Sketching.  I used the words: Fleeting, Shadow, Music, Shores… to write this.
Poets United Think Tank #90 Music

Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada.

18 thoughts on “Poem Sketching”

  1. Loved the image of blurred wings and spirits… and fleeting glances of them…. This had a “otherworldly” feel to it for me. Nice.

  2. Hey dreamer, love how you brought music in to this one, the ending is unbelieveably great.

  3. Love, love, love “liquid serenade.” So beautiful. Water is absolutely captivating.

  4. Good day Dayreamertoo, this is a wonderful poem. I love the words you have chosen to make your musical poem. Loved reading it.
    Thank you for sharing.

  5. Lost can be fun, especially when you get found, unless you stay lost then of course you’d never know being found so you could still have fun, win win..haha

  6. Bren
    Beautiful…I am using water in mine! I love the feathers and the intimate details. It has a magical quality!
    I love it 😀

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