It was all so fleeting
a momentary flicker
inside a tired mind
But,
the softness of my pillow
was soon forgotten then
as I followed your music into
the Will O’ the Wisp mist.
Hope hides in the cloak
of darkness
but you,
you bring a lovers kiss
to lips that too, have
tasted salt.
My soul swirls
unfurls
in the movement
of your hypnotic dance.
I want you to stay
but you remain an
elusive wind-kissed-mist
there, on the edge of a dream.
~*~
© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved
Shared with Magpie Tales #108
Poets United Pantry #91
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Gorgeous, tender, loving, sweet, beautiful, wonderful, uhm let me look up some more praise words 🙂
I DIG DIG DIG IT, xxxxxxxxxxxxx awwwwww!!
we don’t always get what we want
depth of field
Lovely stuff!
Anna
This is just wonderful! Nicely done.
Hope hides in the cloak
of darkness
Spot on!
This has a yearning that lingers on but the hopes are alive. Great verse!
Hank
Ethereal and lovely.
=)
nothing except beautiful …..thank you x
Dreamy in character to match the subject matter. Totally captivating.
Delicate, ethereal, tender …lovely!
Thank you…I enjoyed this very much.
The photo and the title drew me in,
your words kept me til the end.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
Oh this is so lovely, it takes the reader into that state of being on the edge of a dream…….very beautiful, kiddo.
i dream a lot. thinking of love being on the edge of dream is mysterious, and believable.
very good.
Lovely sentiments!
Oh, that third stanza! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!
just out of reach..lovely piece..x
hope may hide in the darkness but with a kiss and thta dance it seems to be alive and well, even if only on the edge of dreams…smiles
You had me at Will O’ the Wisp…
The edge of a dream one just can’t reach is quite the pain, as then you wake up and can’t go back down that lane.
This has a lovely dreamlike feeling …….