It’s always been you
I turn to
seeking solace
when no-one else can say or do
…it’s you

the world
(at times)
seems so unkind
and water falls through
the eye of the storm.

Love knows no time or distance
there is no great divide
yet sometimes
I still try to race against
the rising tides
with tiredness as reward
for folly
(and must remember)
there’s no such thing as

O, sweet, sweet lady of the night
shine upon the shadows in my heart
you are deep in me.
You pull me close then, closer still
with your tidal sway
as deep as the sea and any other
love which lives in me.

You are my peace
You are my rage

Mystic queen of the
blessed night
and I,
I am Cancerian
addicted to you
and the beauty of
your light.


© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved

Shared with Poetry Jam #Inner & Outer limits
Poets United Think Tank #87 #Moon

Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada.

16 thoughts on “Luna”

  1. This is filled with such sweet yearning and truth, I really love this romantic ‘reflection’

    1. Oh yes lovely Luna. I do enjoying seeing all the directions people take with the prompts. Thank for visiting my blog, too.

  2. I love your connection with the moon!
    I love your imagery of being pulled close by her tidal sway
    Your poem is gorgeous and endearing
    So wonderful
    Bren I hope you enjoyed the moon last night
    Thanks for sharing on my blog, this concerns me, too

  3. Always loved the sun and moon and stars … especially the moon and the stars … it means peace and wonder and being able to breathe …

  4. nice…i have great affinity of the moon as well…so nice to see her so large in the sky last night…i was measuring her shadows with my eyes…peace and rage all in one, nice that…

  5. The full moon last night + your lovely poem = what more could we ask for?

  6. Cancerian, eh? My mom is a cancer. And she loves the moon too. She also loves roses. And the first carrot tops peeking from the soil she has planted them in, carrots the tidal sways make taste so so sweet.


  7. Lost in the moon and seems she is very helpful too, giving you someone to talk to. But you know that Man in the Moon is very sneaky, he listens in on everything..haha

  8. I can definitely feel your your attraction(pull) to the moon in this heartfelt write. There definitely is something that soothes and produces a sense of peace when one gives oneself to the moon! Nice!

  9. “as deep as the sea and any other love which lives in me”…..and “addicted to you and the beauty of your light.” So incredibly beautiful, this poem is. I’m Cancerian too. I stood last night looking up at the most beautiful moon………love this very beautiful poem to her beauty, kiddo.

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