Sultry
eyes gazing his way
giving him the gift of
hope
for,
your beauty can never be his
and yet
belongs to every
pair of eyes
which gaze upon you.
If he’d seen you
as you are today maybe
Frank Sinatra too, would have
sung about his luck being a
lady just like you
Tipped his Fedora happily
and smiled.
~*~
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Hm…Frank Sinatra? I see…
Eyes can give the gift of hope…
Yes! Yes! Yes! Totally nailed it.
Lots of good things here. Very enjoyable read.
Nice.
Love this one, especially the reference to Sinatra, which really worked for me.
=)
My take on this was similar to yours…the unattainable. I loved your reference to Frank Sinatra…a great touch.
Any mention of old blue eyes will bring a smile to my face… But even without that I would have loved this piece!!!
your beauty can never be his
and yet
belongs to every
pair of eyes
which gaze upon you.
and everyone wonders…
most importantly…
who has your heart.
When the answer is-everyone-it shocks everyone’s senses.
I love Frank-Baby blue eyes-smiles. This is so appropo Love it
I loved the ending to this. Made me smile!
good one!
Wander
http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com
Like the Sinatra addition there, nicely done. Those eyes sure tell no lies or can do so and we’d be none the wise.
… and it’s better that way …
I like this Bren…sultry eyes but never his, what luck ~
Happy Sunday ~
can you imagine every time you heard that song to know it was about you…smiles…giving him hope but it cant be his…beauty def shared but it def is someones…