Parting the Shadows

20 thoughts on “Parting the Shadows”

1. So beautiful: “touch your heart, I’m there”.

2. Melodious.

3. This is dreamy and delicious!!!

4. Lovely as usual, your work always imbues me with a sense of serenity.

5. DD2, this is gorgeous. Just as I’ve discovered the peaceful place where God is speaking to me, that “thin place” of discovery, so this angel’s music will be heard. Truly lovely writing, and thank you. Amy
   http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2012/02/24/labor-room-blues-in-the-key-of-aargh/

6. “Touch your heart, I’m there”

   then I too
   …know .”

   So warm, lovely, perfect.

7. This poem is very touching. Sometimes we are touched by gentle mysteries that we know in our hearts are true.

8. Love this one.

9. I love these words…so wonderfully said:

   “she knows her notes
   are parting the shadows
   whispering softly
   to the loneliness in my soul

   “Touch your heart, I’m there”

   then I too
   …know .”

   Peace,
   Siggi in Downeast Maine

10. Wow! This is amazing… especially the ending.

11. The poem was melodic itself and I especially saw a beautiful image in “Her gentle breath / reaches / raises hair on skin / causing butterflies to / take to flight”

12. parting the shadows, what a beautiful poem that leaves the reader feeling a secure peace.

13. Music can surely heal and sooth, or letting one get into the groove. Yours pulls the heart strings, just don’t pluck too many..haha

14. Really nice images painted here, the harpist kicked it off wonderfully and your endings have always been good, but have been amazing lately. Thanks.

15. The music heals, even our loneliness ~ Nice one ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.com/2012/02/dream-walk.html

    1. oops…this is the correct link for this prompt ~

       Keep warm ~

       http://everydayamazin.blogspot.com/2012/02/air-of-spring.html

16. nice…making some beautiful music to minister to that heart…just touch it an i am there….nice….

17. Gorgeous words, they caress one’s soul! I love the sentiment~ You took a lyrical tone with string…love it~

18. I think I heard a harp playing as I read it. I feel my angels too. When everyone left at the same time the year of my empty nest, I remarked that I missed knowing their angels were here. Made it doubly empty. But I have mine and it stays close and warns me when I think I should be rash.

19. smiles…think i can hear her play..surely music in your lines today…i like

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