Through sleepless nights of silk and tears
she falls down
Gulps back that cascading sadness and yet
and yet,
In her heart of hearts she knows
the soft pad of footfalls belong to
a certain gentle spirit who
arrives with a story to tell of
her pre-destined cosmic calling.
To dwell in bending light
yielding to universal love
filled with immortal thoughts
where she unravels and reveals
herself as part of the
fabric of time.
~*~
© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved
For Chris.
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Lovely imagery and delicate words. I adore your poetry, so please continue long into the future. 😉
Even faeries weep with eternity
What a great idea–to catch hold of the fabric of time and develop the theme from there. Beautifully written.
love it,
🙂
yes, yes, yes I love that one…part of a whole, as if everything fits…hmmm sweet one D.!
All I can say is wow. The fabric of time- what a great idea for the prompt.
Enchanting. Lovely weaving of words.
Thank You.
Peace
Siggi in Downeast Maine
Lovely sense of the universal.
Ooh, love the form of this piece, especially that second “and yet.”
The title in itself was so tempting..
fabric of time
Awesome read !!
A feeling that she is at first wrapped up in it and then the realization that she is a part of it. Very beautifully put.
Ah… this is a piece of art… just beautiful.
Another wonderful tale, a touch of sadness with the dip of hope. Which was a nice touch as we wouldn’t want the cat to mope.
Simply beautiful from start to finish.. really a fine piece of poetry.
much enjoyed..
Sadness and happiness are coming and going like the tides of the ocean … I love the ocean, but I’m afraid of it … I love people, but I’m afraid of them … Much love to you, Master of words, my friend Bren. Always, cat.
What really struck me that I haven’t seen yet is the idea of unraveling. Beautiful concept to work into the prompt.
I like the retelling of the fabric of time ~
Happy weekend ~
oh so nice…the unraveling and revealing herself as a part of the fabric of time…dwelling in bending light…love the images
nice…love the dance in your words, esp there at the end…To dwell in bending light
yielding to universal love
filled with immortal thoughts
where she unravels and reveals
herself as part of the
fabric of time….very cool verse…
wouldn’t it be nice if some cosmic entity came and told us what we are all about?
Daydreamer, this is just beautiful. We all, I guess, in our own way are part of the ‘fabric of time.’ Anyway, that is a reassuring way to contemplate life’s meaning, I think.