Transient thoughts
swirl with leaves on the wind
whispers of the heart
whipped up by life’s dizzy dance
fragile
vulnerable.
Inclined to flirt
with butterfly tease
it pleases
then flits away before
you may exact a promise
Or,
maybe it’s simply figment
of an over active brain
addicted to feeling love’s
exquisite pain
which leaves a heart
in ruin.
~*~
© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved
Shared with 3 Word Wednesday CCLXlV *Prompt Figment, Inclined,Vulnerable
Poetry Pantry #72
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Lovely poetry, I’d just stick an ‘a’ before figment to really make it rock!
Well told!
each poem is airy and delicate.
So lovely. I especially like the idea of transient thoughts like leaves on the wind.
A long, soul-searching conversation and the words well incorporated!!
Wow, I have to read it again~ I loved it!
You’re seeing figments now, I wouldn’t spread that around, may get locked up..haha…really thought provoking piece.
You have the most unusual way with words, DayDreamer. I feel I sail the 7 seas in just one of your short poems.
xo
such beauty and feeling in this poem.wonderfully put.
Deep piece – love is one of those things that leave all lives fragile…
WOW!
Love this write!
Blessings
I can feel the wind of thought at the window..uneasy upon the ears perhaps..a ‘butterfly tease’..simply love that..Jae
Another great one…Love the ending lines. Even pain sounds beautiful within your words…
Deep and searching words.