Just beyond the horizon
utopia waits
a thousand years between
has no depth or meaning
to fill the void
… the longing.
An unwinding stream flows
through my world of blue
on its voyage to meet
distant stars which
haunt my nights
with whispers from
you.
Ocean surf brings the
wild horse’s I ride upon to
drift away on evening tides
time after time.
Out of the depths
profound passion joins
a dance of clouds
which mingle with
silver slips of moonlight
to caress that ache
within.
~*~
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Shared with Poetry Picnic #9 Longing, Loss, Losing etc
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Love the white horses poem and the pic, Bren … I remember Sachalin, one of my farourites from way back when … have a pic somewhere … will have to look for it … will send it to you then … Thanks for making me smile, my friend. Love, cat.
the picture of the waves with the faces of the voices really intrigued me, and to go with the beautiful verses in your poem makes it a vivid image.
thanks for the kind comments u always leave on my page. 🙂
Such as amazing and creative write love your image so much
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/mirror-of-truth/
I too loved the imagery and it brought back a lovely childhood memory based in the movie The Last Unicorn, thank you.
This is beautiful…and “caresses that ache within” my soul today. Thank you, for this AND the tweet that led me here.
Such beautiful imagery! I really like this.
Hello.
The imagery of this is simply beautiful.
A most profound poem indeed.
Thanks for sharing & for your visit/comment. They are much appreciated.
The Beauty Of Love
I love the flow of this.
Ocean surf brings the
wild horse’s I ride upon to
drift away on evening tides
time after time.
love these lines.
sometimes, the computer does not allow me to comment for your post, forgive.
keep it up.
very creative thinking.
divine spirits, smiles.