What draws me to you
(reasons unclear)
a powerful persuassion.
As water has always moved
seeps into uneven breathing
finds those spaces I run and hide
and lures me from the edge.

None but the brave choose
to tarry in their thoughts
of you and yet,
I fall over and over
as you wend and weave
those realms of light
across the water’s keen
and chill winds blow
toward the end of day.

La Luna
Sweet, sweet lady of the night
you’ve always held me
in your spell
and I,
I come willing
Captive to the mystique and charm
of your prelude to infinity


© Daydreamertoo      *All rights reserved

Shared with Poets United Poetry Pantry #69

Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada.

7 thoughts on “Luna”

  1. hmmm the way I feel about the sea…she and her captivating essence 🙂 I like impersonation of nature 🙂 nicely done!

  2. Beautiful piece, Bren. Your words always capture and convey your meaning and what you want readers to know. I’ve been very busy this Summer so have not been to sites or on my own as much as I would like but now Fall is here I hope to visit you more.

  3. I am able to use it much easier…and even though CAPTCH is not my fav, it seems to be taking it every time now and i can load your page without getting error messages…

    i am a leo, but on the last day…the water has always fascinated me as with the moon…smiles.

  4. The moon has always captivated me…i think it pulls at the water inside me…and on romantic tides…smiles.

  5. So beautiful Daydreamer….Moonlight is an enchanting thing….You’ve just reminded me of a quote of my fav writer:”….For a dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.”
    Oscar Wilde

    Have a wonderful weekend dear friend
    love & hugs

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