Two for One on Rain

Too much, and you’re a curse. Not enough, and your presence is prayed for.
Splish, splash, splosh.
Always loved the gentle rains, not so much when you’re cold as ice, just a nice soft rain that falls upon my cheeks or, window pane.
You can rain on my parade anytime. I promise, I won’t mind.

Shared with G-Man’s Flash 55

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Walking in the rain
in a daydreamers mind
the gentle rains of autumn
I call my
‘peaceful kind.’

Puddles at my feet
stirring ripples in the heart
liquid drops of thought
swelling rivers in my eyes
trickle out to greet those
falling from the
skies.

Footstep follows footstep
soft rain soaks and seeps
into the sadness within.

Letting go the ties of love
is so very hard to do
especially when you loved
a friend…
as I, my friend
…loved you.

Peaceful walk in a soft fall rain
each tiny tear
drops of liquid pain.

But I can see you now
chastising my sorrow.

I smile, wipe my eyes and
bless this much loved rain
for I’m sure it’s the angels
weeping too, so pleased
they are at meeting
you.

Water is Life and…

I feel ‘you’ in the rain.

~*~

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I wrote this a long time ago when one of my Aunt’s second husband died.  He was a good friend and, I loved him.
Shared with Poets United Thursday think Tank Prompt #67 Rain

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Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada and design custom made candles

17 thoughts on “Two for One on Rain”

  1. I find comfort in the rain, a release, time out for one’s soul. I love these lines:

    “Puddles at my feet
    stirring ripples in the heart
    liquid drops of thought
    swelling rivers in my eyes
    trickle out to greet those
    falling from the
    skies”
    Very clever and lyrical~

  2. Daydreamer too….
    You have a very talented Muse My Friend.
    Loved your 55!
    You are always one of my Faves….;-)
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

  3. Both are beautiful pieces
    “letting go the ties of love is so very hard to do…”
    I guess the rain can help wash away the sorrow for a new day

    thanks for your visit 🙂

  4. There’s something comforting about the rain I think. I do like to walk in a light one in times when I am sad, feels like a natural refreshing thing to do. Awesome write. 🙂

  5. Well, the photo is… let’s put it this way. If that was a common sight, we would see men doing rain dances every night! And the last line of you poem

    Water is Life and…
    I feel ‘you’ in the rain.

    is very beautiful.

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