Over and over
seeking respite
I lose myself to music and
comforting blanket of night.
Balanced
more than once life turned itself
upside down
Or,
was it me who fell and didn’t know then
which way was up
It doesn’t matter now
anyhow.
Life moves in gentle ripples
and clouds trickle by in sluggish moves
across an Autumn sky
where questions hold their own
peculiar answer.
Your beauty shines its light
on those lives you don’t
even know you touch
…yet do.
Perfume still fills the air
electrifying senses of those who’d dare
to reach for the moon
knowing if they miss
they’ll still go onto higher love
aware
that in those quiet wonders
it’s all there.
© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved
Shared withPoetry Picnic Week #4
dVerse Poets Openlinknight(tomorrow)
Lovely .. . the verse touched me deeply….
“Your beauty shines its light
on those lives you don’t
even know you touch
…yet do.”
thanks for sharing and I look forward to seeing you again next week…
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/09/whispers-in-memories-way-of-soul.html
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Your beauty shines its light
on those lives you don’t
even know you touch
…yet do.
This is such a lovely thought among an uplifting poem, thank you.
so enjoyable and comforting lovely write
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/
This is absolutely beautiful, hopeful, reassuring and inspiring. I especially love the closing lines. Yes. It’s all there. So gorgeous a poem!
I find the words rather comforting. Thanks for your poem, liked this one a lot.
so nice daydreamer! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/summer-wind/
nice one
Lovely wity beautiful imagery!
… story of my live … thanks for touching my life with your words, Bren. Love, cat.
it’s all there.
Indeed it is.
true beauty does that.
I really enjoyed this. Written so perfectly.
Here is my entry
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/rose.html
Very interesting elements here! A poem of a truly dreamer!
Really lovely. Yeah, the last lines are beautiful. : )
This awesome! Eveery stanza is right on the money, and I can elate personally to each thought you present. I love this one!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/
smiles…love the positive spin in the last stanza yes, sometimes we miss but there are def higher targets…
i am having a real hard time getting on your page…it keeps looking up my computer…
brilliant lines…
enjoyed your imagery…
I loved the entire poem but your ending was very well expressed…..sometimes life can really send us in a maze that we dont knw which way anymore….
So when you find your up, do you know your down? Does your down become left or your left become right? Heck maybe it just goes all diagonal and messes with your sight..haha…very nice piece.
So comforting and soothing to the soul. Such a lovely write. Thank you!
Lovely, especially love the last stanza, a perfect end note.