Through open windows
Luna shines her light
upon living waters dance.
She
(in her mind)
so free.
Wind chimes sing.
Lull her with their melody
in these…
the sweetest hours.
Dying embers of day
fall…
warms an insatiable love
which refuses to slumber
in her soul
despite the bodies sleeping.
She’ll close her eyes
to the lady’s silvery gaze
glimpse a little Utopian wish
before sinking into nights
tender keeping.
~*~
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This is so very beautiful and restful.
I agree it has a hypnotic feel! I love the moon peeking on her and then her silvery gaze, really beautiful!
Incredibly beautiful and peaceful to read. Just lovely.
I find this piece to be so beautiful – the nuances of mood and gentle images are particularly soothing.
so nice – you really capture a wonderful tone
Ah, this is lovely.
You’ve drawn the moon into your home and heart. It often talks to me too. Beautiful poem.
This is wonderfully soothing–I just love it.
Gayle
Beautiful imagery and the words make me even more longing for ‘slumber in my soul’.
Hypnotic… intoxicating.
Sexy, romantic, moving, smooth.
a tender write here… can feel myself sinking into the night under the bright moon
Free in her mind and utopian thoughts at that, she’s really going right to town..haha…another lovely piece.
Love this poem, the atmosphere is just right and it sounds like a wonderful night.
This reads like an awesome night to me, alone, in the dark with the rain shining, with memories and old love close at heart 🙂 Lovely pic as well 🙂