Original Sin


You are sultry, silent
gazing at me
I am mesmerized
for you have that ‘look’ in
your eyes and I am
helpless to resist the wanting
of your promise.

I am the wind that brushes
your hair.
My fingers…
the comb that teases its
way slowly through those tresses
to release your wildest

You part your lips for me
I approach
and dormant butterflies in my
sex take to flight as I see
that soft pink flesh
wet and wanting my

You entwine slender fingers
anticipating my touch
electrifying each lustful
thought in my mind as it too
feels their tips upon
my own willing skin.

Eager to please, you tease me
with a hint of breast’s as ripe
as apples dangle tempting
from the bough waiting for me
to satisfy my hunger on
their ache.

You look at me like the
Goddess of Love just
claimed her richest prize
and I come willing

knowing that lusting after
your forbidden fruit will be my

Original Sin.


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I do not believe in the Biblical teachings of how the creation of humans began. I do however think that the original Adam and Eve were probably told not to tamper with the tree of knowledge (Our DNA) or there would be serious consequences. I do believe we are doing now exactly what we were told not to do.
I recently read they are creating human/animal beings now. Such as, putting a human brain into a pigs body, growing human kidneys in sheep, growing human ears on mice and such. Who knows what they’re creating in secret laboratories. Scientists know no limits, now they can manipulate our DNA, to what they will try to create. They didn’t get those pictures of men with horse’s bodies, and men with wings and other such things from out of nowhere. They had to have first been seen to have been drawn/carved into history. I maybe wrong but, do feel sooner, rather than later, this tampering with our DNA will bring about our downfall.
I also feel that mankind has been at the height of great civillisation before, we’ve had all sorts of knowledge about space flight and how to defy gravity for speed and such as that but because there was such a mass mix of human/beastial beings and abberations, the Prime Creator/s bought about the Great flood to wipe it all out and begin again.
I don’t know if my thinking is right or wrong, really… no-one can say because we weren’t there.

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Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada.

19 thoughts on “Original Sin”

  1. Loved the poem and would love to chat over a beer (or a glass of apple cider might be more appropriate since we’re talking of Adam and Eve) about the whole human DNA thing. I think we would agree on most of it, but it would be an incredibly interesting discussion, of that I’m so sure! Thank you for sparking creativity with your words (both poetic and otherwise).

  2. loved the poem..
    its soothing n serene.
    Though I’m nt a christian and never got the chance to read any christian text but I’ve read about Biblical concept of creation. Its very similar to Hindu’s version of theory of creation.

    Nice read !!

  3. Nobody “was there”, but I do believe that we can see into the future with the eyes of our minds. Love, cat.

  4. that is sheer madness…kinda island of dr moreau….a very intriguing retelling of the scenes in the garden and carries a needed message in messing with creation…

  5. Even though I am a follower of Jesus, I don’t take the Bible verbatim. I loved your depiction of what I think of as the myth of Adam and Eve; that is, the way people of that day might be able to comprehend the start of things, also the way people might be swayed to believe in one God rather than maintain polytheistic deities, etc.

    On DNA, I’m not sure scientists are that sinister. They have been able to save lives by putting pigs’ heart valves into humans (including the ultimate pig, Arnold Schwarzenegger – talk about Freudian!) and other things. I do not believe they are going willy-nilly to invent “human/animal” hybrids – that is a George Bush quote, one that has become the stuff of urban legend.

    I do believe there is room to doubt that ALL science is for betterment of humans. All one need do is look at the hydrogen bomb and Oppenheimer’s quote from the Hindu tradition: “I am become death…” to know that not all science is in the public interest.

    The poem is rich in imagery and reimagines the tale of Adam and Eve with lushness and love. Thanks for a thought-provoking poem and commentary! Amy

  6. hmmm yes much to be seen in the future, what we humans can come up with indeed!
    I liked the picture as well 🙂

  7. Yes I defintely believe what they are doing is moronic. What the heck is the point in putting a person’s brain in a pig? So undercover spy or something?

    Also have the idea we had great heights before and then poof were wiped out and everything started again, but who knows.

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