The Greater Hope

A hint of fragrance
sweet secrets stirred

just out of reach

emotions rise
tidal waves of passion


On bended knee
I surrender

trusting the stillness
of tranquility beyond
embrace of light.

She speaks to me now
through whispering winds
delivering a greater hope

and the world goes on

and the world goes on.


© Daydreamertoo        *All rights reserved

You have been featured on Friday Poetry Blog Review at Gooseberry Garden.
I logged in this morning to discover the above in a comment left overnight.
I’m deeply touched by this honour, thank you.

 Shared with G-Man’s Flash 55
Romantic Friday Writers #15 New Horizons

Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada.

27 thoughts on “The Greater Hope”

  1. I like this very much. Especially this bit
    On bended knee
    I surrender

    trusting the stillness
    of tranquility beyond
    embrace of light.

    Well written

  2. Hi! Thanks for posting your link on RFW again. Thanks for sharing a message of hope in such divine language. You are very talented. I was rapt in your words.


  3. Hi,

    I’m not sure if this is entered for RFW, but it nevertheless fits the theme for “New Horizons”.

    Lovely prose, and poignant essence tinged with sadness yet hope for the future. 😉


  4. I like your greater hope. The world goes on. It always does and has no matter what the tragedy. Great 55

  5. A fun 55 or so, glad you got the honor to well on the go. Yes it is very true, hope is needed through and though.

  6. Bravo Madame 😉
    You deserve this honor Bren, totally.
    Your writing is strong, sensual, both real and unreal …
    Thank you for sharing your soul with us.

  7. My Friend…
    What a beautiful piece of writing.
    Obviously NOT just thrown together.
    Loved your 55
    What a fantastic touch of class you are.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

  8. love the refrain there at the end and the massage of hope…it is needed more and more these days…

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