A hint of fragrance
sweet secrets stirred
just out of reach
emotions rise
tidal waves of passion
tsunami.
On bended knee
I surrender
trusting the stillness
of tranquility beyond
embrace of light.
She speaks to me now
through whispering winds
delivering a greater hope
and the world goes on
and the world goes on.
~*~
© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved
You have been featured on Friday Poetry Blog Review at Gooseberry Garden.
I logged in this morning to discover the above in a comment left overnight.
I’m deeply touched by this honour, thank you.
Shared with G-Man’s Flash 55
Romantic Friday Writers #15 New Horizons
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“On bended knee/I surrender”–favorite line, I think I’m in consensus with a few others. Lovely, dreamer.
when a fragrance can bring us to our knees hmmm
nice imagery, I liked it 🙂
Dear Daydreamer Too,
Thank you so much for your kind words about my little romantic story. ANd now that I have read your post it means even more to me that you enjoyed reading my text. You are such a gifted poet!
Best wishes,
Anna
For the benefit of other readers:
Anna’s RFW No.15-‘New Horizons: Cissi tells Selma…’
sweet sexy and a well constructed piece
congrats on the review…
I like this very much. Especially this bit
On bended knee
I surrender
trusting the stillness
of tranquility beyond
embrace of light.
Well written
Truly a thing of beauty, this poem and the love it describes.
A well deserved honour. I enjoyed this piece very much 🙂
Hope is magical… it always boost up spirits even in odd conditions..
Narration is superb !!
Really liked this. “sweet secrets stirred” and “embrace of light” were particularly evocative.
Hi! Thanks for posting your link on RFW again. Thanks for sharing a message of hope in such divine language. You are very talented. I was rapt in your words.
Denise
Lovely!!!!!!
Lovely piece!
Congratulations on the feature!
Hi,
I’m not sure if this is entered for RFW, but it nevertheless fits the theme for “New Horizons”.
Lovely prose, and poignant essence tinged with sadness yet hope for the future. 😉
best
F
This is the most hopeful, sweetly soft post of the week. Thanks!
I like your greater hope. The world goes on. It always does and has no matter what the tragedy. Great 55
Such a beautiful and tranquil feeling to this poem. I love the surrender.
You read this post and instantly hear a voice saying “all will be well”… You’re a true talent
Awesome dreamy words!!
Loved the image.. xox
oh oh ! romance in such lovely images .. i like it 🙂
Magical – we all hope that someone feels this way about us.
I’m very glad the world goes on even in the face of overwhelming passion.
Great flow and substance.
A fun 55 or so, glad you got the honor to well on the go. Yes it is very true, hope is needed through and though.
Bravo Madame 😉
You deserve this honor Bren, totally.
Your writing is strong, sensual, both real and unreal …
Thank you for sharing your soul with us.
My Friend…
What a beautiful piece of writing.
Obviously NOT just thrown together.
Loved your 55
What a fantastic touch of class you are.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
love the refrain there at the end and the massage of hope…it is needed more and more these days…
Your words always stir my soul and settle around me like a tranquil veil, shutting out the day’s chatter. Lovely.