NAKED SIN
Smooth, smooth, smooth
she whispers words
I love to hear
breathed soft
upon a sigh.
She comes close.
As close as moistened kisses
are to skin from the
soaked satin petals
of a rose.
Gently…
with all the ease and
tenderness of La Luna’s
softest glow
she sways as I gaze in
admiration upon her
jewel encrusted gown.
She sparkles
glitters,
shakes her hips and shimmers
using all her feminine wiles
to entice.
Lures me in
soaks me up and breathes me
So much so, I yearn to
swim inside the deepest
undulating waves of
her warmth and
naked sin.
~*~
© Daydreamertoo *All rights reserved
You can interpret this however you wish. I believe you can make anything and everything sensual without being smutty, using any bad language or porn and, I do love to go swimming. *winks
It is a beautiful love poem. And your interpretation of a passionate night of love is very unique…
Beautiful, passionate, and yes, nothing at all smutty about it, Bren. Just words filled with emotion.
Beautiful, so sensual and tempting.
This was so lovely…though I saw it as a seductive something happening in the poem….and only realized it COULD be the sea….from the first comment.
went back and yep…interpertation is open to the eyes and mind of the reader.
But it’s got a great shake to it! Enjoyed this poem mightily.
Lady Nyo
love the title, the imagery is perfect,
beautiful writing, thanks for sharing.
🙂
I agree with you and you’ve done a great job here. Very sensual 🙂
“Lures me in
soaks me up and breathes me…” another stunning one Daydreamer, love your way with words 🙂
How swiftly your words bring out the expressions
Lovely !!
very creative ..
Wow, I have to tell you, this really came through loud and clear. You were having an in-depth sexual tsunami moment here, and every bit of it is heard. Wish Neruda could have read this – he would have translated it into la espanol. I believe there is a time and place for all of us to “swim” in our intimacy, and you need not apologize for that. The “soaked satin petals of a rose” just melted me. Great work! Amy
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Lovely, sensual piece no matter how you read it!
with swimming like this is would be sure to wear sun screen…steamy…smiles…..
Your poetry is very sensual here and does indeed flow like a river. I definitely like the way you’ve shown us and not told us…
Denise
Definitely say you proved your point, can be done without being smutty, as you just did.
Love the smooth and sensual voice.
As to your note, I agree. As they say, less is more ~
It is indeed sensual any way one chooses to look at it. Had me going several differnet ways!
I know you’ve already visited my blog today, But I’ll leave the link in case some of your readers would like to check out “The Lake”. http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/
Laughing…when I first read this, I was like…mmm…a vivid, sensual write. Then when I read your note & reread the poem, I realized you were talking about the sea. Either way, your words tantalize my soul!
Awesome!
I’m here:
Make Sweet Love To Me