JOURNEY TO NOW
In the wake of the wind
I watch the past receding.
A gentle breeze catching my thoughts
with salted-sweet embrace.
Miracles of love ‘neath waterfalls
caress the ache inside
with scintillating moments
I give leave to drift away over
earth’s unfolding majesty
from the spirit flame
within.
Angel gifts
bequeathed an enchanting legacy
of silken cosmic ties
which speak the language of my soul
and guide it through its
journey back to now.
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Poetry Pantry #61
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hmmmm beautiful feeling when the past stops haunting us 🙂
Just absolutely beautiful.
Really enjoy this journey. Your work calms the soul.
It is all in the beat and the pictures really enhances the mood of the words, but the words move you without pictures too. Inspiring!
…an enchanting legacy
of silken cosmic ties…gorgeous again. The journey of the all journeys
there is a quality of gentle calm and peace about this. Thanks for sharing it with d’Verse
Lovely write, the return to present carried so well here. ~ Rose
I feel like I’ve gone on a cosmic journey with you.
Lovely Daydreamertoo! Like a cool glass of water on a hot day. I particularly liked: ‘salted-sweet embrace’, ‘scintillating moments’, and ‘bequeathed an enchanting legacy’. Beautiful!
“salted-sweet embrace” what a great line to set up this lovely piece of work. This was a great way to start my day!
Guiding back to now… the wisdom is inherent, now is all we have.
It readily floats and it’s mesmerizing to me. It journeys to the past and back again. Loved it!
This is a beautiful journey, eloquently written. Imagery is strong as well. Loved it! Thanks, and peace, Amy
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A gentle soft feeling in this piece… peaceful, like I was floating in the words.
So beautiful! “In the wake of the wind, I watch the past receding.” I love this “journey back to now.”
Salted… sweet nice contrast
perfect expressions of a journey
u summed it all so well 🙂
awesome imagery… Good job
I think I actually felt a cool breeze while reading 🙂 A lovely piece of writing and the photo is spectacular. So glad to have found you through dVerse.
..this has a lovely, soft fold.. i like it!
I love those last few lines:
“…which speak the language of my soul
and guide it through its
journey back to now.”
Beautiful. ;o)
A gentle journey….evocative, tender.
Lady Nyo
Soft as a feather!
The poem and image create such a serene image…a nice break for me in a stressful day. Thank you.
thanks for taking us with you on that journey…this has a lofty and tender feeling with lots of space to breathe…
This is lovely. Nice share.
this has a really nice feel to it…the salted breeze…and then the angels gifts of the legacy yet bringing it into the now…lovely…
did you mean to link this one? gunga din is linked at dverse right now…i will fix it behind the scenes…
soft beautiful words of the journey… i like it ~