Love me like no other.
Love me like a lover
I’d give you a standing ovation


guard you jealously
and, keep you just for me.

my dark desire.

I’ll hold you close
burn in the flame and
passion of your
Run my tongue
your surface.
Feel the smoothness of
your walls.
Slip into your
Drink the sweetest
juice of

I’ll ride the waves of
rippling tides and savour
all the flavours a
tongue delights to

Sweet, exotic pleasure.

nothing left to waste
bar my need for more.

When I take you
I want you to

No half measures.
No teasing
nor guilt upon my
heart for adulterous

You are my love.

You are my
It seems I surrender
all my will to you.

I always give

For you
Sweetest chocolate


Chocolate is

My Sin.


Ummmm sorry
if you were expecting something else…..

I never said I wasn’t a  tease….*winks
I used to be quite adicted to chocolate, but, not anymore.

(Now, where did I hide it?)

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Sunday scribblings #278 Standing Ovation

Author: Daydreamer

I live on a beautiful island in Atlantic Canada.

22 thoughts on “Sin”

  1. This is so hot and sensual. I’m ready for a hot fudge sundae. Thanks for pointing this one out to me! LOVE IT!

  2. Love this. It is certainly how I feel as I savor a bite of really good dark chocolate. Chocolate will forever be my first love.

  3. Oh this is very cool, you totally dragged me down other mental pathways (which I enjoyed, hee hee).But chocolate does that for me too. Especially with caramel inside.

  4. Well, this about steamed my glasses up until I realized the nature of your love, than I cracked up at my own twisted little sensual mind! Grrrrreat piece, indeed. Thanks so much, Amy

  5. I simply love and adore this write, Bren! Oh! How I love chocolate and only have it once in awhile but you certainly have said a “mouthful” here. LOL

  6. I love this… but I though you’d be sucking the pit of a cherry or licking peach juice as it dripped off your tongue! LOL!

  7. I thoroughly enjoyed this, Daydreamer! You and I were thinking along the same lines this week, and I’m afraid I’m still addicted to chocolate…:)

  8. Wow !
    It’s very….. ummmmm… strong and sweet, like chocolate 😉
    Thanks for this piece Bren.

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