SO
In an elegant ritual
worthy of love
you warmed me
through the longest of winter chills.
Breathed me in with a
single breath that was true.
Held me there
in the depths of your soul
Where,
In the absence of shadows
I found my sanctuary
lay within your light.
So bright,
so right,
so true,
Leaving me
so free
So perfect,
in my imperfect harmony
Your light was all that you are
and, all I can ever hope to be.
~*~
© Daydreamer Too *All rights reserved
Shared at One Shot Wednesday # 48 and also at
Thursday Poets Rally Week 45
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This one is really sweet. Imperfections are what we all are about, too. Loved the format of the text , btw
Very lovely daydreamer, inspiring a feeling of pureness that goes well with your new blog layout! ~MsQ
This can only be soul love. Your poetic insight is beautiful here. Wow!
wonderful!
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Love,
Luna
A touching piece. I enjoyed it.
I saw the accompanying picture of the flower and was wondering if it has anything to relate to the content?
So romantic and beautiful … you have a way with words 🙂
Very beautiful n touching…….
sending hugs along.. xx
That filled me in with a sense of gratitude.
Thank you for the wonderful words!
extremely touching. thank you.
and um… Thank you. for everything.
Love and Light.
Luna
Thank you for your kind words on my blog (Dream Running Ahead of Me) and for sharing this lovely poem.
Clearly we are kindred spirits. You living in North America but growing up in West Sussex while I grew up in North America and now live in West Sussex. That must give us some sort of special bond…
Just reading your poem and repeating it in my heart, I am now showered in light.
This poem has such a lovely air about it, romantic and full of soul =)
..clingy i suppose.. which i can sometimes be.
wonderful!
I agree with littlemisshomosapien,
“In the absence of shadows
I found my sanctuary
lay within your light”
was just beautiful.
So warm, ethereal, lovely!
“In the absence of shadows
I found my sanctuary
lay within your light.”
That is very lovely.
Beautiful… Love the flow and how romantic this is! Sigh…
It felt like a flower’s words to the sun somehow! Beautiful words! 🙂
So true
Beautiful words, nice image.
This is lovely. I’ve not experienced it. Even in light, I have shadow. There is no umbrella with largess to disguise what I owe. I belive there is a freedom in imperfect harmony. I seek it. I dig with my hands, broken nails not withstanding. Worth it, no?
I wish I could live in that… hahaha. It sounds wonderful. :] It made me think of springs of clean fresh water… :]
Beautiful and the image is perfect for the words.
This is beautiful. It’s strong and real — without being overly sentimental. Excellent capture of feeling –
soulful words, well put.
Happy Rally.
🙂
soo cool and sweet 🙂
thanks for the visit D. 🙂
such beautiful and tender words…finding the one who loves us in our imperfect harmonies is surely worth a poem…
lovely…the perfect making the imperfect whole…in just a breath…love the intimacy of this…
lovely thank you so much for sharing
Indescribably good
Lovely imperfection! 🙂
Beautiful words … so true … thanks for sharing your gift. Love, cat.