BY STORM
Slick and sleek
seas rush to greet the shore
in passionate waves that
pummel the walls of
a melting heart.
A wind whips white horses
into the gallops as I
too feel their gush
of rolling thunder.
What a beautiful noise
Energy
… alive
As I breathe
‘neath electric blue skies once more
that urge me on to wander
with a lust for life,
I cannot deny.
Wings of rising hope
take me where reality
meets the dream.
The past has
already been written
but…
the future waits
…Yet to be seen.
~*~
© Daydreamer Too *all rights reserved
Shared with Poetry Pot Luck (Storms etc )
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Sometimes, “Wow!” is all I can say. But I will add, wonderful, and well done!
“as I too feel their gush of rolling thunder” Beautiful! I enjoyed the passionate imagery.
So lovely!
Passing through from Summer Breezes space and found your delightful space and very thought provoking poetry , I enjoyed my visit
Thank you
Wishing you much love and happiness
Ian
Beautiful interpretation of the theme.
I love how your page decor seems to fit into the theme as well. This piece is beautiful for me, reminds me of the time I was walking in a storm and how it just electrified me and made me want to prance against all that wind and–aw shoot, I feel another poem coming on!
You’ve inspired me. Your imagery is point on!
~MsQ
It draws you in grabs hold and doesnt let you go till the end. 🙂
I dig this line: “What a beautiful noise. Energy
… alive” Thanks for the visit, enjoy the potluck!
striking words.
very powerful write.
🙂
It looks like a storm is forming inside a storm… I particularly like the second stanza. It’s the one setting a powerful mood!
I love the passion in your imagery. Beautiful poem!
Nice, let’s hope dream meets reality in the yet to come future 🙂
this left me breathless….well done.
What a beautiful noise….
I like how you are using the words, great write!
Beautiful like a song-I love the flow.”A wind whips white horses into the gallops .. the imagery is outstanding and I loved reading the poem again and again!
this is a really good poem!
wow truly very nice
“Electric blue skies” what a killer description – loved the write!