Sweet Temptation
February 3rd, 2012 § 20 Comments
I have no resistance
and confess
I’m addicted
for, before I can avert my
eyes you’ve already
tantalised
And, knowing I’d fall
like all the other
Angels who have
fallen
You tease
Lay there doing nothing
but please my eyes in
all raw nakedness.
I know you smile behind
the crimson veil that
hides those many
pleasures I so willingly
come seeking.
I’m intoxicated
Your beauty leads my
mind to wandering in
heady lust
I crave
to taste you on my tongue
Savour your flavours as they
assault my senses like
butterflies evolve from
chrysalis, burst forth then
take to flight,
You stir passion’s
heated flame to heights
that go beyond
all dreams.
Dare I pluck you from
where you lay,
inviting,
eat you whole or,
should I slowly suck
and drink your juices
down
Satisfy a longing need
to feed, then weep at
such Heaven sent
creation.
Ahh, can this be bliss
for you truely
are my
Sweet Temptation.
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I’m not really as bad as this, I can resist chocolate, except for maybe as a once a week treat 
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Loved how you took me to something other than strawberries and then there one was dipped in chocolate…lol
Yum and there I am left yearning, mean mean mean D. :-p
great ending
Wonderfully done. Deceptively susceptible.
K
For the love of chocolate…nice words!
The temptation was more of wondering where the verse was leading to. It has that feeling of sensuous make-up very unlike an innocent strawberry! Great verse!
Hank
Many a lover would be very disappointed you were referring to a chocolate covered strawberry! ha ha
Love it!
Great writing – but why spoil it by saying you can resist chocolate? Why would anyone do that? Still, your poem’s better than chocolate…
Before I saw the photo of the luscious strawberry, my mind was thinking something totally different. So well done. Part of their temptation is their mouthwatering smell too.
Sweet temptation indeed ~
I always wanted to read a hot earthy write from you….mmm, very yummy indeed ~
Sweet write!
Wow, and whew! A wonderfully tempting write. I think I will turn on my fan.
hehe…i am usually not a chocolate person…def more fruit in my diet…chocolate on strawberries or with peanut butter though is def a temptation for me though…you had me heading other directions though…haha
What? You can’t give them a bloody hell and ignore them? ..haha…with food I can ignore just about anything, picky eating has it’s perks.
Dee-lish! This is excellent. Now, I’m hungry, in more ways than one.
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Yummy! I love how you pulled me along right up to the end. Wow!
Wow.. now this was truly about temptation. Succulent…
OMG, this led me down totally Other avenues, till I saw the photo at the end. Wowzers! If I could feel all that over a chocolate strawberry, I’d be set for life. Hee hee. Wonderfully effective writing – with a twist!
Ha! Thank you for participating so “sweetly” in FBF.